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Offline VIrtueeL
« Posted 2014-11-18 18:42:06 »



tell me what you think =D

btw am not good with layers in the game will try to fix that for later =D

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Offline CptSpike
« Reply #1 - Posted 2014-11-18 18:50:35 »

I rather like it, well done. Far better than anything I could make.
Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #2 - Posted 2014-11-18 18:56:59 »

thank you =D

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Offline ThePixelPony

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« Reply #3 - Posted 2014-11-18 19:00:05 »

Very nice art. I certainly like it =)

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Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #4 - Posted 2014-11-18 19:00:54 »

thanks =D

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Offline kpars
« Reply #5 - Posted 2014-11-18 19:14:47 »

It's highly inconsistent.

Make sure everything is kept to scale, don't just take a bunch of random sprites and draw them onto the screen at random sizes. That's a huge turn-off for many people in pixel-art.

You seem to recognize the importance of simplicity in pixel-art, and that's a good thing, but consistency is just as important.

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Offline Opiop
« Reply #6 - Posted 2014-11-18 19:26:02 »

For the most part nice job. The trees look decent.

However, the UI elements look severely out of place and squashed.
Offline matanui159

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Aww... So cute...


« Reply #7 - Posted 2014-11-19 02:22:33 »

Better than my art Grin

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Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #8 - Posted 2014-11-19 05:56:20 »

ty =D for telling me

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Offline bigbass1997

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« Reply #9 - Posted 2014-11-19 23:40:15 »

Your art is amazing!

Only thing that needs work is the UI element in the bottom left corner of the screen.
I'm having trouble recognizing what it is, and its color scheme (theme) and shape seems much different than the rest of the art.

But otherwise I really love the trees and flowers. Way better than anything I could ever make. Smiley

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Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #10 - Posted 2014-11-20 13:56:57 »

thanks :3 well it the UI was made before the other am doing new sprites for that and new sprites for player
as well so it fits in with the rest =D

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Offline mbabuskov

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« Reply #11 - Posted 2014-11-26 16:58:30 »

For the most part nice job. The trees look decent.

Trees? I thought those were mushrooms Wink

Things to fix:

- consistent shadows (flowers have them, mushrooms do not)
- maybe add 2-3 different rotations for the flowers
- grass gives out the grid. Try making 4-5 different tiles and then mix them randomly

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Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #12 - Posted 2014-11-26 17:13:30 »

thanks for the idea!

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Offline Chequered

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« Reply #13 - Posted 2014-11-27 21:28:14 »

Looks good but maybe have a look at the size ratios.
the trees are a bit small for example.
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