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Offline Virum

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« Posted 2005-01-28 05:40:00 »

I started work on a short animation project today, that I'm code naming Rock On! I'd appreciate any feedback people would like to give me. This is pretty much my second animation, but I'm pretty happy with how it is so far.

I'm using the free rig Generi.

Here be the first WIP:

Rock On! WIP 1 (Div-X)

Looking forward to hearing from my fellow programmers!

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Offline Vorax

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« Reply #1 - Posted 2005-01-28 11:05:48 »

Suggestions:

- When the right arm moves up, the upper body should also have some movement from it's momentum.  Not alot, but it shouldn't be static.

- Eyes - When the head is moving the eyes should move as though they are looking at something instead of remaining static with the head movement.  Also, maybe a blink or a squint to be expressive of the action being performed.

- mouth - Should be expressive based on the actions being performed.  Curl the lips, open mouth, etc.

Great start though.

Offline Virum

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« Reply #2 - Posted 2005-01-28 17:06:12 »

Thanks Vorax.

Here's the latest:

Rock On Wip 2 (Div-X)

Changes: A bit more lower body movement and spine movement at the beginning. A bit more (*snrk*) blinking.

I'm not sure where to add the blinks, any ideas? Also facial expressions, I have no idea when to change them.

I'll work on the upperbody movement that you mentioned next update.

Thanks man. Smiley

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Offline Vorax

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« Reply #3 - Posted 2005-01-28 22:04:51 »

It's looking better!

The body movement is pretty good now from the lower body movement, but could still use a tilt forward or backward (just a very little) from the arm.  The eye blink and closing at the end is a nice touch.  



Offline dranonymous

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« Reply #4 - Posted 2005-01-29 01:56:11 »

Great start.  I'd slow things down some.  There's a lot of 'stuff' going on that I want to take in, but its over so quick I feel like I missed 'something'.

Is the creature your design?

Regards,
Dr. A>
Offline Virum

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« Reply #5 - Posted 2005-01-29 05:44:24 »

Quote
Great start.  I'd slow things down some.  There's a lot of 'stuff' going on that I want to take in, but its over so quick I feel like I missed 'something'.

Is the creature your design?

Regards,
Dr. A>



Wish I had seen your post sooner, so everything is still fast.  Thanks. Smiley

No the creature is not my design, see the top post for a link to the rig.

Vorax: Thanks, I tried to extentuate that more in this latest version.

Rock On Wip 3 (Div-X)

Thanks for all the help guys. Smiley

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