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Offline FabulousFellini
« Reply #90 - Posted 2018-05-08 21:54:30 »

Drew this cottage yesterday and am looking for some feedback. Particularly on the left side, something feels off to me but I'm not sure what.



I think it looks good. It reads well. I wouldn't want to mess with it too much. I don't see what is "off" about the left side.

Maybe, must maybe, a slightly darker shade of orange for the underside of the roof on the left, as it gets less light than the rooftop? 

Looks good to me too.  I wouldn't be too worried about the left side.  If whatever is actually 'off', I bet the only person that will ever notice is you because it looks really good.

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Offline cylab

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« Reply #91 - Posted 2018-05-09 15:12:16 »

Some observations. Maybe one of these make you feel off:
- the top of the door does not align with the top of the window
- the wood direction is different from the window side
- the wood color is the same like the outer right wall, so implies, that it lies in the shadow as well
- the space left from the dooris wider than right of it
- the outer joist is more narrow than the middle one

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Offline philfrei
« Reply #92 - Posted 2018-05-09 19:20:06 »

Some observations. Maybe one of these make you feel off:
- the top of the door does not align with the top of the window
- the wood direction is different from the window side
- the wood color is the same like the outer right wall, so implies, that it lies in the shadow as well
- the space left from the dooris wider than right of it
- the outer joist is more narrow than the middle one


@cylab -- You have a very good eye for visual detail!

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Offline tariqbroadnax

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« Reply #93 - Posted 2018-05-20 21:32:30 »

I've decided to focus explicitly on practicing my sketching. I'm impatient. I want to improve as fast as possible.

Offline tariqbroadnax

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« Reply #94 - Posted 2018-05-22 04:35:11 »

More sketches. I don't think I can keep doing this many a day.
I know its hard to see. But, I promise you. Its looks worse when its clear.
Also, this makes 10. Each page takes about 30 min. That's 5 hours. 9995 hours left. 19990 sketches left. Cheesy



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Offline cygnus
« Reply #95 - Posted 2018-05-25 19:37:04 »


Got a drawing tablet, made a sketch (from eye, I didn't overlay anything). For some reason it saves lighter than I see it, so the mistakes in the light through the water and the random lines to the left of the face are really visible even when they aren't to me.

It's now my lock screen background (adjusted to fit phone)
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