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Offline VIrtueeL
« Posted 2014-12-12 13:07:14 »

tell me what you think =D

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Offline MrPizzaCake

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« Reply #1 - Posted 2014-12-12 14:40:01 »

Pretty good! I'd add some noise to the terrain though, it looks little too flat.

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Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #2 - Posted 2014-12-12 15:46:17 »

ok thank you

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Offline Jacob Pickens
« Reply #3 - Posted 2014-12-13 19:43:12 »

i think the flat gives it a bit of style. Noise is a little too over done in my honest opinion.

Offline GreenLantern101
« Reply #4 - Posted 2014-12-27 19:40:27 »

Try adding a little bit of parallax background instead of the sky-blue expanse. And while flat might be stylish, there's a difference between elegance and emptiness, and its up to the individual developer to find a line to draw.
Offline JJengineering
« Reply #5 - Posted 2014-12-28 10:01:27 »

Looks good for a start :)
I've looked at a random of your YT videos and I just put out some thoughts to you :P (IF you haven't changed stuff during late development i don't know of :))

* If you made the background smoother than the foreground, the depth effect would work better i think.
* Maybe one more layer, and some adjusted parallax scrolling for that.
* In case you make your terrain noisier, make sure the player doesn't have to make little jumps every two tiles. I remember Terraria having that for a very long time, and   didnt play it for a long time, then installed it, and i was VERY positively surprised that i could now run across tile heights of 1 instead of jumping :P
* In the video I saw, i liked the idea that you make things like 'ground-bombs' (can't find the right word now :x), wiggle and also move and animate things in general!

Though i tend to get carried away with graphics and small things like that, which are easily added later on, don't bother too much with stuff like that if you don't need/want to.

Keep up the good work :)
All the best with your project!

Offline VIrtueeL
« Reply #6 - Posted 2014-12-28 11:22:10 »

thanks i will use your advice's =D at least some of em like the one walk on block thingy

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Offline JJengineering
« Reply #7 - Posted 2014-12-28 11:36:25 »

Little things like that can annoy the hell out of players :P (Out of me at least)
I see you put a lot of effort into the game, thats great, keep it up! :)
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